Hi Werner,
On 22/07/14 19:05, Werner Koch wrote:
> On Tue, 22 Jul 2014 18:37, eal(a)fsfe.org said:
>
>> http://fsfe.org/about/albers/emailselfdefense/emailselfdefense.inside.de.png
>
> I already mentioned that to Matze: The blades of the private and the
> public key should be different. Even non-geeks will notice that both
> keys are identical in function because they know that only the blades
> distinguish keys.
well, seems like Matze kept this information private because I was not aware
of that. Anyway, no problem, I will change the blades.
>> TEXT: Every German speaker is encouraged to proofread the text, give
>> feedback or improve it. For easy collaboration, I made an etherpad
>
> I assume that leaflet is not intended for geeks but for all users
> including ties. Thus I recommend to replace the informal pronoun "Du"
> by "Sie" or avoid its use. We are not Billy shelf selling company.
As mentioned in the mail before, I am going to fix that and to use "Sie" in
the whole text.
Beste Grüße,
Erik
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Dear designers and legal team,
Dear Erik,
In March I created a visually new version[1] of the free software and
tools leaflet. It is now designed according to our new website layout
(colours and fonts).
I used text from the English and old and new German version. The
German text is currently being revised and I would like to incorporate
some of the new text as well.
The source file[2] is also available.
Erik: I would like to inform you about this before the old ones get
printed again. I hope we can join forces here and create a visually
more appealing leaflet with a revised text.
My question for designers: How does it look? Do you have any
suggestions on how to improve the design.
For the legal team: How is the contribution done right? I don't know
about the original author. Also I'm not sure if it's okay to put my
name on it this way.
> Herausgeber Free Software Foundation Europe e.V. office(a)fsfe.org
> http://fsfe.org
>
> Gestaltung P3K | Gestaltungstechnik http://p3k-design.de
> philipp(a)p3k-design.de
>
> Druck Umweltdruckerei http://dieumweltdruckerei.de
It translates to:
> Publisher Free Software Foundation Europe e.V. office(a)fsfe.org
> http://fsfe.org
>
> Design P3K | Gestaltungstechnik http://p3k-design.de
> philipp(a)p3k-design.de
>
> Printed by Umweltdruckerei http://dieumweltdruckerei.de
Umweltdruckerei is a green print shop around Hannover.
Basically I would like to get a bunch printed there and use them on
events and share them with the Munich Fellowship group which I attend
to occasionally.
But before I do that I would like to ask for your approval and consult
if I need to change the text. Of course: If everything approves you
may use the flyer as you wish. I would put them in public domain or
use a creative commons license; whichever fits the fsfe best.
Many kind regards,
Phil
1:
http://download.fsfe.org//advocacy/leaflets/leaflet-fs-and-tools_2014.pdf
2:
http://download.fsfe.org//advocacy/leaflets/leaflet-fs-and-tools_2014.sla
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Dear all,
we are producing an emailselfdefense-flyer. The original version [1] was made
by the FSF and published under CC-license. So we make a remix, a FSFE version
that uses our design and does promotion for us.
Target group: All those people that do not know about GnuPG and maybe even not
about Free Software. So, the content is very basic and it should self-motivate
people to get more information instead of having all information inside.
First use: Freedom not Fear demonstration on August 30, a very big
demonstration agains mass surveillance here in Germany. Therefore, To have the
flyer done and ready for the demonstration, I will order them next week.
Therefore, I would like to share my final draft version with you. You can
download the PNG files for now from the SVN, here:
http://fsfe.org/about/albers/emailselfdefense/emailselfdefense.front.de.pnghttp://fsfe.org/about/albers/emailselfdefense/emailselfdefense.inside.de.png
(just temporarily and deleted next week)
I would like to ask you for your feedback about
TEXT: Every German speaker is encouraged to proofread the text, give
feedback or improve it. For easy collaboration, I made an etherpad about
the text:
https://public.pad.fsfe.org/p/emailselfdefense-flyertext
Please proofread or give comments. I wrote half a page myself and I have
rewritten parts of the FSF
DESIGN: please share your thoughts about the design, the colors, the
pictures that have been used. Please do not care about detail by now (like
"the background of page 1 and 4 do not fit correctly"). I will take care of
that. But I first would like to fix the text. And when the text will be
changed, their surrounding boxes also will be changed, than maybe the
background ... That means that all design-details will be fixed as the last
step of the whole process.
So, please, by know, concerning design just let me know how you like it in
general, the colours and the symbols etc.
thanks for your contributions,
Erik
[1] https://emailselfdefense.fsf.org/en/emailselfdefense_source.zip
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