Great folder. Thank you for all the work you put in.
This are my remarks:
In the white box "What is free software" on the outside I would shorten the line length. There is enough space to not get this close to the border of the box with the text lines. As well in this box the last words are missing a space: "Free Software".
The final link in the box about FSFE is neither in the center nor left or right aligned. I would align it left, but if you feel it should be centered, it should be done properly in order to not look messy.
In the "Support Our Work" paragraph I would give the fellowship link more space. Now it looks squeezed in without reason since there is plenty of space for a more generous placement without spreading too far to loose the clear relation to this paragraph. As well there is a dash in the middle of: "autonomy".
On the inside I think the last sentence sould use: "is" instead of "are": "More information is available at:".
As well I fear the contrast is not high enough to get a good readability of copy text on paper. Therefore I would brighten the background where normal copy text is placed upon it.
At least on my screen the block-text doesn't format lines very well. I believe Inkscape is not very good in that regard and I would very carefully control the line breaks by hand. In my opinion it looks much better to split up a word than to have huge gaps with empty space in the lines.
Best Franz
On Mon, 2013-07-01 at 00:26 +0200, Torsten Grote wrote:
Hi,
with the help of Matthias I finally managed to finish the F-Droid flyer I started to work on a long time ago.
If you like, please provide feedback for everything that can be improved without major changes.
The flyer is supposed to be folded. So the first page is the right-most section and the last page is in the middle. You'll figure it out ;)
Front: http://grobox.de/fsfe/folder_front.en.pdf
Back (inside): http://grobox.de/fsfe/folder_back.en.pdf
Kind Regards, Torsten _______________________________________________ Designers mailing list Designers@fsfeurope.org https://mail.fsfeurope.org/mailman/listinfo/designers