On 23/07/14 19:12, Max Mehl wrote:
Then maybe it makes sense to have an extra box for it? Or is it ok, because all these programs and how to install them is written @ https://emailselfdefense.fsf.org/de and we have this link for people who want to know more?
I'm a bit sceptical that people who are interested in that will automatically open this link. Maybe we should mention that there're also installation instructions for every system and not only "learn email self defense". What do you think?
yes, I agree. That would be better phrased: "learn how to install and use GnuPG in 30 minutes for your emailself defense" ...
I noticed that you only used the informal "du"/"dein" instead of "Du"/"Dein" like it should be written in personal letters. Is this intended? If so, please fix these words in the standard "about FSFE" part as it is written differently there.
Thanks for the hint. The text that is used in the flyer is deriving about 70 percent from the original flyer by the FSF. And they have been using "Du". While the text "about FSFE" is based on our own text and we usually use "Sie". I am going to fix that. [1]
[1] despite the fact I like "Du" more because it sounds more direct and motivating.
Well okay, I was only implying that "Du" instead of "du" would be the better choice. But if we want to address important business people as well, we should stick to the formal "Sie".
ah, ok. Actually, I am also in favor of producing both versions for different audiences? For example a package to the Parliament should use "Sie", while a flyer for a demo better adresses "Du", no?
But please have another look at the capital letter, especially in "Ihren". There are several parts where the first letter is small. I would have changed it myself but the version in the pad isn't up-to-date.
Are you sure that you write every "Ihren" with a capital letter?
Best, Erik