Hi,
I incorporated Matthias suggestions.
This is the most recent version of the folder. If there aren't any further comments I understand this as an "ok" from the designer's list:
http://www.tierrechtskongress.at/2011/image/ffi-de.png http://www.tierrechtskongress.at/2011/image/ffa-de.png
Best Franz
On Thu, 2011-12-22 at 18:44 +0100, Franz Gratzer wrote:
Hi Matthias,
Wolfgang from our local Fellowship group promised me he will send an e-mail to the German team with our draft to ask for feedback on the text. It looks like I was faster with the request for feedback from the designers. ;)
Thank you for your suggestions. The short keywords for the four freedoms are a very good idea indeed. I'm not so sure about the numbers because at least Stallman explains the four freedoms always starting with zero. Therefore I thought it's the best to keep the established counting style
- even if I had to answer questions about it in my free software
workshops already...
Best Franz
On Thu, 2011-12-22 at 15:26 +0100, Matthias Kirschner wrote:
Hi Franz,
- Franz Gratzer franz.gratzer@fsfe.org [2011-12-17 16:00:13 +0100]:
in the last months the fellowship group in Vienna was working on a leaflet which shall be used as an introduction into Free Software for people who didn't think about it so far at all.
This is a very nice design! It might be a good idea to get some more feedback on the text instead of the design. E.g. on fsfe-de@fsfeurope.org or on germany@ and austria@.
One thing I already would recommend: The four freedoms should start with 1 and not 0. Else it is irritating for non techis. Beside that I had very good experiences to mention four names, in English "use, study, share, improve" and in German the 4 Vfreiheiten ;) "Verwenden, Verstehen, Verbreiten, Verbessern". If you mention that some times, people are able to remember the four freedoms much better afterwards.
That's why I suggest to use those four words in this part. Either by:
*Verwenden*: Explain... *Verstehen*: Explain... *Verbreiten*: Explain... *Verbessern*: Explain...
Or by having it in the text but somehow highlighted (other color, bold, etc.).
Thanks a lot for your work! Matthias