On 02/07/12 12:11, Alessandro Polvani wrote:

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Hi Designers@

A while ago, I made this leaflet with the text of the "Right to Read" article by Richard Stallman.

It would be great if I could receive a feedback from you, and suggestions on how to improve it.

Hi this is what in my eyes would enhance the quality of your document:

1_ check your whole document to use the same font & size. Text on the first Page on the left seems to be a bit too small.

2_ Line spacing seems to be quite narrow, give each line more space to breathe - that makes it easier to read. (Alteratively make the font smaller but keep the line spacing OR use another font that runs narrower)

3_ replace "1st freedom:", "2nd freedom:", ... with "1.", "2.",... and indent the text behind the numbers.

4_ scale down the fsfe logo quite a bit and align it to the top left

5_ consider to hyphenate the paragraphs on page 2

6_ the headline "What is Free Software" should be larger

-Robert