> I am sorry. This is one sentence?
Yes. Well observed. If you also notice it was a response to
Florian's invitation to 'elaborat[e] a little bit about your
experience?'.
The request was a bit vague but
I wrote in good faith about my experience as requested. This
included some irritation which I conveyed in the way you observed. I
was writing from that point of view, a sense of irritation with how
I think the FSFE could do better, not from the perspective of trying
to get a prize for literature. If I hadn't been asked about 'my
experience' I would not have said any more about it since I find
personal experience at times an unreliable indicator of what perhaps
needs to be done next - and yet sometimes it's all we have - so I
accepted the challenge.
Still on the subject of my personal experience then - it feels odd
to be asked to offer to help and then be criticized for trying to
help! If I had been asked to write an academic essay or a more
reflective opinion piece using simple English or Esperanto then I
may have done so too, but feeling judged on tone and grammar alone
when the context is all about me being asked to offer my personal
experience in a mailing list is a bit excessive too, don't you
think?