> I am sorry. This is one sentence?

Yes. Well observed. If you also notice it was a response to Florian's invitation to 'elaborat[e] a little bit about your experience?'.

The request was a bit vague but

I wrote in good faith about my experience as requested. This included some irritation which I conveyed in the way you observed. I was writing from that point of view, a sense of irritation with how I think the FSFE could do better, not from the perspective of trying to get a prize for literature. If I hadn't been asked about 'my experience' I would not have said any more about it since I find personal experience at times an unreliable indicator of what perhaps needs to be done next - and yet sometimes it's all we have - so I accepted the challenge.

Still on the subject of my personal experience then - it feels odd to be asked to offer to help and then be criticized for trying to help! If I had been asked to write an academic essay or a more reflective opinion piece using simple English or Esperanto then I may have done so too, but feeling judged on tone and grammar alone when the context is all about me being asked to offer my personal experience in a mailing list is a bit excessive too, don't you think?