Hi Alessandro and everyone
On 11/06/2013 07:27 PM, Alessandro Rubini wrote:
Did I miss something?
It looks very good to me, but "software" like all "*ware" is not countable. It is a substance, like "stuff", "butter", "milk", "crap". Use is wrong in several places of the leflet and should be fixed accordingly.
Mh, I'm very confused now... Please find confusing sentences with "software" bellow:
* Free Software gives us essential freedom that other type of software deny us.
* Free Software can be used as tool.
* There is an incredible number of Free Software available
* However, fortunately Free Software accounts for a large proportion of those embedded software.
Are those sentences ok? Sorry for the very basic question. I'll ask a native English speaker to proofread the whole leaflet and improve the wording, but I'd like to understand..
Best, Lucile