|| On Thu, 6 Sep 2001 07:52:18 +0200 || Xavi Drudis Ferran xdrudis@tinet.org wrote:
xdf> Just a suggestion. Why use the term "local language"?.
You have a point there. My gut-feeling says that "other" is slightly better than "any," though, so it is now:
"For various reasons, speaking of Free Software or the equivalent term in other languages offers many advantages."
I feel that "other" is entirely neutral and should not pose a problem, or am I missing something here?
xdf> I'd also put the "Free software offers freedom" part at the top, xdf> so that:
I'm not so sure whether this is a good idea although I see the points you are making.
This is because the last part tends to stick to the readers brain best and I want that to be the freedom part, also it gives us the nice chance to end with "Freedom counts!," which I believe is nice. Putting it on top also kind of destroys the "flow" of the document, I think. Does this make sense to you?
Regards, Georg