Thanks for your feedback & suggestions, Éibhear; I've incorporated most of it into a new draft, which I've uploaded to the same page: http://homepage.eircom.net/~cathalmcginley/e-voting/draft-letter.html
Éibhear wrote:
I think it's worth emphasising that if this new system comes in, the election process will be in the control of a pair of private companies who are not even indigenous to Ireland.
A valid point, but hard to make without sounding Euro-phobic. I think we must remain focused on the software concern - if a foreign company had produced Free Software for this system, the problems I refer to would go away (although all the others would remain).
Perhaps you might put after "...a backwards step in terms of democracy, and it is natural that people are opposed to it." the following:
"Consider that with the current system every citizen...
Thanks, I've included a variation of this. A direct appeal works very well here.
I'm concerned that the paragraph that covers anonymity of voters isn't correct ... requires some social engineering as well as computing know-how to pull off.
Quite right, it requires complicity on the part of the election officials as well as non-random vote recording. I hadn't made this clear. I've moved this point to the second paragraph and re-worded it. This is actually one concern that won't be solved by the Voter Verified Audit Trail, but only by being able to study the code and ensure that it's the same code running on the machines. (Perhaps I should mention this in the letter). I think this is a valid concern but I certainly don't want to undermine our case. If it can't be put plainly, we can take it out.
I would add to the point about the audit the following: "The source code for the computer programs used in June's forthcoming election will not be handed over to the Department of the Environment until after September....
I've put this in too. It leads me to think of putting: "Why is the Department of the Environment privileged over all other Irish citizens in being allowed to see this code?", but I think the general gist of that point has already been made elsewhere in the letter. Perhaps a line for the conclusion?
"Elections are often won and lost by a handful of votes...
I've included this as part of the conclusion, it nicely emphasizes the flaws of the system in a way that should worry politicians. Excellent.
- Cathal.