First draft of a PR for a "Green bridge" between two environmental festivals on 31st March.
Please review, edit, and comment.
http://dfd.etherpad.fsfe.org/31
Thanks!
Sam.
On Thu, 2012-03-22 at 17:48 +0000, Sam Tuke wrote:
First draft of a PR for a "Green bridge" between two environmental festivals on 31st March.
Sorry, put it on the wrong etherpad. The text now resides here:
http://etherpad.fsfe.org/kKUcGsN4ow
Please contribute before Monday 26th at 16.00 CET.
Thanks,
Sam.
I made some edits, mostly on the final paragraph where we say it's an alternative to proprietary offerings. Maybe someone should also have a look at that paragraph as it's the take-away message.
On Fri, Mar 23, 2012 at 2:34 PM, Sam Tuke samtuke@fsfe.org wrote:
On Thu, 2012-03-22 at 17:48 +0000, Sam Tuke wrote:
First draft of a PR for a "Green bridge" between two environmental festivals on 31st March.
Sorry, put it on the wrong etherpad. The text now resides here:
http://etherpad.fsfe.org/kKUcGsN4ow
Please contribute before Monday 26th at 16.00 CET.
Thanks,
Sam.
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On Sat, 2012-03-24 at 17:35 +0100, William from Texas wrote:
I made some edits, mostly on the final paragraph where we say it's an alternative to proprietary offerings. Maybe someone should also have a look at that paragraph as it's the take-away message.
Thanks William, yes it definitely reads better after your changes. I made a few alterations to the last paragraph in order to shorten it, as this will be a press release, and the shorter the better.
Thanks very much for your help!
Sam.