Hi all,
can you please have a last look on the flyer that Stian created?
I added one section, and will print 100 in English and 100 in German tomorrow for the LinuxTag.
So please let my immediately know if you find errors.
Greetings
HennR
Hi Henner,
The section you added is really what was needed. I have some small suggestions for language improvement though:
"This will strengthen the Free Software Community and will give us a chance" to "This will strengthen the Free Software Community and give us a chance"
"offers buttons that webmaster can use" to "offers buttons that webmasters can use"
"So if you are a webmaster, please use our buttons. You can also inform webmasters about our campaign." to "If you see a website claiming that Adobe Reader is required to read PDF document, please let them know that this is not the case and point them to our website."
"The coordinators of this initiative are" to "Coordinators of the campaign are"
all the best, /Stian
Hi,
all of your suggestions are fine so far, but...
Stian Rødven Eide schrieb:
Hi Henner,
The section you added is really what was needed. I have some small suggestions for language improvement though:
"This will strengthen the Free Software Community and will give us a chance" to "This will strengthen the Free Software Community and give us a chance"
"offers buttons that webmaster can use" to "offers buttons that webmasters can use"
...this one is not ;)
What do you want to tell me?
Greetings
HennR
From HennR, 2009-06-22:
Hi,
all of your suggestions are fine so far, but...
Stian Rødven Eide schrieb:
Hi Henner,
The section you added is really what was needed. I have some small suggestions for language improvement though:
"This will strengthen the Free Software Community and will give us a chance" to "This will strengthen the Free Software Community and give us a chance"
"offers buttons that webmaster can use" to "offers buttons that webmasters can use"
...this one is not ;)
What do you want to tell me?
I'm not entirely sure what you mean. Using webmaster in singular form in this case implies a kind of monotheistic web, where all pages are managed by the One True Webmaster. Though it might be the case that all webmasters are spiritually linked through telepathic means and cosmically woven together into a single unity, I suggest we treat them as individuals for the time being ;-)
/Stian
Hi Henner,
* HennR hennr@fsfe.org [2009-06-22 11:58:33 +0200]:
Stian Rødven Eide schrieb:
I suggest we treat them as individuals for the time being ;-)
I never will! ;)
Can you sent me the final version?
Best wishes, Matthias
* HennR hennr@fsfe.org [2009-06-22 14:20:25 +0200]:
Yes, I can send you the final version.
Please remove the
Copyright (C) Free Software Foundation Europe 2009 Verbatim copying and distribution of this entire article is permitted in any medium, provided this notice is preserved.
We never use such stuff on leaflets. And also the paragraph about representation I wrote you in the German one.
Thank you very much, Matthias